Alex has written his first book. He took the initiative himself. I did not even know he was doing this until he was done. It is pretty good. There are eleven pages with a drawing on every page. The main characters names are: This and That. It looks like bad grammar if you don't know this fact. I only had to correct the spelling of 'their', otherwise it is exactly as written. Perhaps when I have more time I'll try to scan the drawings. They are funny. He is already hard at work on the sequel.
This & That's New Cape!
p1-While This and That had long hair, they did not have their capes.
p2-Until one day after they cut their hair Rumble and Tumble gave them each their capes! They liked it.
p3-They liked their capes so much that they even wrote their names on it!
p4-They played with their capes every day until they realized the capes weren't play capes! They were real superhero capes!
p5- They landed on a cloud. But this cloud wasn't any ordinary cloud. It had cape hangers and doors. It even had a pirate and whale next to it!
p6-Someone came out the door! It's tongue was sticking out, it's legs were coming out the door. It had hair that looked like this (picture of hair) and it even had an ant on it's tongue! Yuck!
p7-This was so scared she jumped into That's arms like Scooby Do! Ha!
p8-But it turned out he was nice. So This & That greeted him. But then...
p9-Someone else came out. This was scared a ton!!!
p10-But it turned out he was nice too. So they both greeted him too.
p11-Aren't you glad they got new capes? The End (or is it just the beginning?)
Tuesday, March 22, 2005
Alex's First Picture Book
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